Sanghvi,K. (2018). Drunk Driving Detection . http://www.hrpub.org/download/20180730/CSIT2-13510632.pdf
In this article, Sanghvi (2018) researches on drunk driving, which is one of the prime causes to traffic accidents and proposed a variety of sensors that could easily detect and halt people from driving under the influence of alcohol. She mentions how drunk driving accidents are a common critical issue in third world countries and the use of breath monitor by traffic police does not spot all drunk cases. As an alternative, she states that an advanced essential method would be incorporating low-cost and high precise sensors in cars. If the sensors detect alcohol in the driver’s system, it could be programmed to slow down the vehicle speed, warn other people or ” notify the police through the internet”. In support, she presented few drunk detection systems that incorporated sensors such as air-pack, accelerometer, orientation and alcohol, with their advantages and limitations. The article also highlighted that sensors that were combined and personalized with parameters provide an effective solution for the drunk driving problem. Moreover, the article provided useful pieces of information for our research project regarding on types of sensors and technology system that could be implemented in cars to prevent road accidents caused by drunk driving. It not only shows statistical figures and tests on how each sensor works but also gives a clearer description of the methods on building a technology system with sensors, which is a specific focus for our research project.
Hi Sarmila,
ReplyDeleteYour annotated summary has been very insightful, I didn't know that there were so many sensors that can be incorporated into cars! However, there are some areas of improvements that I would like to suggest:
1) The font sizing and format could be uniform throughout the blog.
2) In the first line, the use of "the" when talking about traffic accidents as a general, clashes. It could also be obsolete in the sentence.
3) When stating examples, perhaps it would be suitable to use "for example..." / "such as..." / "to name some examples, …" instead of using "like" as it may appear to be informal or unprofessional.
Apart from the suggestions mentioned above, I enjoyed reading your summary.
Cheers!
Ash
Hi Ash,
DeleteThank you for taking the time to read and glad that you enjoyed reading it ! I'll make the necessary changes. :)
Regards,
Sarmila
Hi Sarmila,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the summary. You have a good write-up here. I agree with the article regarding how the sensors are useful in detecting drunk drivers and can help to slow down the car to prevent them from getting into accidents. I am glad the article has helped you in understanding how the sensors work in a car-setting and, I hope we can translate that understanding into our report!
Regards,
Izzati
Hi Izzati,
DeleteThank you for taking the time to read and glad that you find this summary knowledgable ! I'll definietly share and input few of the understandings into out report. :)
Regards,
Sarmila
Hi Sarmila,
ReplyDeletegood job on the summary. The summary you have written gave me some insights on the project of our proposal.
Some improvements could be to make the font size the same size.
Thank you for the efforts in writing this summary.
Regards,
Carely
Hi Carely,
DeleteThank you for taking the time to read and glad that it gave you a greater insights into our project ! I'll make the necessary changes to the font size ( i didn't realize it when i uploaded it ) :)
Regards,
Sarmila
Thanks for the revision, Sarmila.
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